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He fell from the roof
To land on her mouth
-So sweet and soft-
The rest of him fell in a trough
Where the rest of her lay
-fish tail and pale arms-
He grabbed her
-Or maybe she grabbed him-
To make sure the other is real
She was there to the touch
Open to the eye
Delicious to the mouth
But forgotten to the nose
-odorless-
He was not sure she was under him
-his nose throwing complaints to his head
To ignore the obvious truth-
Lips met again
For another sweet moment
-Eyes squeezed shut-
The fewer senses present
The more wonderful the embrace became
Maybe it was her gift to him
-confusing his nose-
It made her all the more impossible
And her lips all the more desirable
©2007-2009 ~I-is-I-be
:iconi-is-i-be:

Author's Comments

quite litterally, this is from one of my dreams. the girl(woman?) in the trough(in case you have not guessed) is a mermaid. the boy(man?, i have no clue.

insperation: it had toi be something from my life if it was in
my dream....

sorry about any spelling/grammar mistakes in poetry or comments

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:icontidublger:
Isn't this the same one?
:iconi-is-i-be:
yeah, i wanted to post it again so more people could see it in the browsing section...it was when i first joined, so i did'nt know what i was doing...sorry
:iconkayla2021:
I love mermaids! Nice poem!

--
Kayla Stroup

"To live would be an awfully big adventure." ~ Peter Pan

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