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Your like a needle in the
Back of my head
Your killing me
Your getting to me
I’m wishing that I was
Dead

I’m walking with you
Your making me fallow
I know your using me
To be all that you can be

Yesterday: you smacked me out side the head
Yesterday: I don’t know what I said
Yesterday: I called the cops on you
They shot you in the @ss
I just laughed

The needle has left me
But the pain still remains
Instead of a needle I have found a knife
One that cuts deeper
One that sears the flesh
©2007-2009 ~I-is-I-be
:iconi-is-i-be:

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i wrote this who knows how long ago. i have song writen next to it, but i can't find the tune, so i'm puting it down as poetry.

i bleep out @ss, because i don't know if we can cuss( if we can, please tell me)
i also want to get rid of that line, it doesn't flow right, so if you can help me come up with an alternative, THANK YOU.

please comment

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:iconnotobsessive:
how about they shot you in the back... or they pinned you to the grass, or somethin like that, jw... are you a girl or a boy cuz it didn't say in your profile... dont mind me asking.... heh heh... woot! ttyl.

--
"To live and not to breathe,
Is to die in tragedy.
To run, to run away.
To find what you believe,"
(Jesus of Suburbia- Green Day)
:iconi-is-i-be:
what are you talking about now.


me is gender? that is irrelivent for me. gender only matters if you love, and ,saddly, i don't
:iconnotobsessive:
i dont remember its been some time now.

--
"To live and not to breathe,
Is to die in tragedy.
To run, to run away.
To find what you believe,"
(Jesus of Suburbia- Green Day)
:iconnotobsessive:
yea:)

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"To live and not to breathe,
Is to die in tragedy.
To run, to run away.
To find what you believe,"
(Jesus of Suburbia- Green Day)
:iconzoldor:
This would be a lot better if you had put "you're" instead of "your," but putting aside grammatical errors, this is good. ^_^
:iconi-is-i-be:
thanks.

yeah, grammer and spelling are not my strong points

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